Paradise Seeker

28 - END

Shir0gane, October 20th, 2013, 3:35 pm
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- I'm sorry, it ends here, but we couldn't possibly tell their whole life story from here on. Especially not since this was planned as a shortstory to begin with.
Consider it not as an ending, but a wonderful beginning for the two of them :)

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snow crystal, October 20th, 2013, 7:38 am
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- ... I think at the moment the grief that it's over is stronger than the happinees about a sweet ending... goodness. This story is far from over; in fact, this is just the beginning of something great and adventurous and interesting... that makes the fact even sadder that you two stopped here :( Very sad indeed... I would have liked to read a lot more about those two adorable characters.

LucienRay, October 20th, 2013, 7:52 am
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- Q////Q That's mean... perfect ending but... mean!! >__>

snow crystal is right. I'd looove. to read a sequel of this... even if this ending has a deeper meaning... I just don't want it to be over. Nope. Not gonna accept this. û__u

ANYWAY: You two did a reeeally great job. The story was addicting. The art was beautiful and kinda... don't know how to say this right but "powerful"...
Besides: I want to see you next year on the GC in Cologne. So be there so that I can buy stuff and stalk you and so on. (Haha. I don't intend to be creepy, really. ^w^" )

Akki-Chan, October 20th, 2013, 9:00 am
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- Really, really beautifull story =3
I know it's a one shot, but i cant stop hopling for more.
I look forward to you'r future works~

ceyec, October 20th, 2013, 9:52 am
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- Wonderful!! but...i want more! excellent art, excellent history, everything!!

Guest, October 20th, 2013, 5:21 pm
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- i think most of us really want more to this but it was very good story telling and art ...

Rainbow-Allyson, October 21st, 2013, 4:08 am
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- We all now want more! But I think it's perfect right where it is. But if you did keep on going I would read it for sure!
Only thing I have to say it was to short for my liking but the more I think about story the more I fall in love with it. You did a wonderful job!

hemmer (Guest), October 21st, 2013, 1:07 pm
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- Nice timeless message there, hell might be other people as the saying (and the werewolf bigots! :P) suggests, but paradise can be as well.
It's great to see him having found his paradise, even if it wasn't so much a place as a person. Something we all hope for I think.

Also really good to see a happy end every once in a while. <3
Great job, you two.
As for sequels, I think it would spoil the message. Some things are good precisely because they are short and concise.
I do however think that the world it is set in could be an interesting one.

wicked kisameru, November 8th, 2013, 4:20 pm
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- Whaaaat? Though.. nice ending :]

xlilim, November 14th, 2014, 4:01 am
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- Aww! This was a beautiful short story! So much emotion! I'm happy this ends as it does! :)

JunnGerl, June 20th, 2016, 6:05 pm
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- Aww that was a cute story. Oh the tears of hopelessness.

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